Syrup

Syrup

We make our own sugar, small symphonies,
browning and browning, growing old quick
and fast yet not fast enough, racking the electricity bill,
our gif of every living star’s front snapshot,
glimmering and boiling in my grandmother’s pot.
A splinter of a light finds its way to our hearts.

That world thickens quietly.
That world knows no scars or dimples.
That world erosive waterfall of amber
smoothening the rocks.
A fae with a crumbling soul picks us from the spice rack.
A glimpse of light besieges and it found a crack.

Our darkness’s make love ombre and mute
and leave our hollows destitute;
the sky is dusk, the clouds are parachutes.
Pulling cornered circles into bursting,
our see-through larks that like an elder sunlight
dissolves over the park.
The light like heaven’s sludge
descending down our mouths.

Cupid’s hunt pt.1 – collage done with Midjourney by Oloriel

*Sharing the poem with Desperate Poets for the open link weekend. Please enjoy reading what other participants have to offer ❤



20 responses to “Syrup”

  1. Great imagery of the light in the bubbling sugar syrup… !!!

    1. Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading! 🙂

  2. Lovely images. Love the see-through larks and elder sunlight. And the different forms of light

    1. Thank you, so glad you enjoyed the imagery, and hope the light mixed in with the sweet just enough.

  3. How gorgeous. What delicious delight to read and imagine.

    1. Thank you for reading and for leaving me such lovely words ❤

  4. I’m not sure I understand exactly what the poem means, but that didn’t stop me from enjoying it. The piece is full of a rich imagery.

    1. It is about cooking together, and finding joy in it – albeit coloured heavily by my surrealist tendencies. Thank you for reading the poem!

  5. Poem and art work are both fabulous.

    1. Thank you for the kind words ❤

  6. An ode to dark, thick sweetness — how we meld in its surge — yet it is something concocted, poured, cooked, very much a poem.

    1. Thank you, Brendan, looking forward to go back to writing and participating in the challenges you host more.

    1. Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

    1. Thank you so much for your kind words, I am glad you enjoyed reading

  7. Love the ells and tees bouncing around in the last verse. I have at least one scar from having made caramel. Peace. —CC

    1. Thank you, glad you enjoyed the play of sounds, and glad I am not the only one with caramel making scars!

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