Dark divinity

Caspar David FriedrichWoman Before Rising Sun, ca. 1818, oil on canvas.

Dark divinity

Lead in the water, neon on the cross,
night – big boss raven, whistling through the bog,
patterns in the moss,
heartbeats like freon, a host of the haven.
The wind tripping on the branches,
the moonlight lip-gloss,
the tree-line of possibility turnt and tossed,
the tears feasting on the colours of the rocks.
Petals closed around some brimming,
innocent and wild,
the sky a tired parent folding in the tide
while on the rusted plater of the scales
crescends the loss
of I, maven.

*sharing with Desperate Poets Open Link Weekend.



11 responses to “Dark divinity”

  1. This is really beautiful writing……..I love all the imagery, and the movement and soundscapes echoing through the poem.

    1. Thank you, Sherry, I hope the poem carried at least a little bit of a soothing, twilight peace.

  2. Beautiful imagery… love especially the moonlight lip-gloss and the tree-line of possibility!

    1. Thank you, I do like to sometimes think as though the celestial bodies of the sky doll up a bit , for us poets! 🙂

  3. So much in dark augment here, the brush strokes seeped in umber and indigo. Presence is vibrant in this waxing absence!

    1. Somewhere, it is always dusk! Thank you for reading and hosting, as always, Brendan, looking forward to next week’s challenge as well. You had me at noir!

  4. That opening line is like a knife, sharp and already blooded, while the poem following seems equally cutting, but more dreamlike and floating, compressing the carbon of its images down to diamonds: “..the moonlight lip-gloss,” and “..heartbeats like freon..” (!) and the picture of a solitary being who understands, perhaps more than is good for her, painted against a natural world in flux. Beautiful, and powerful writing.

    1. Thank you so much for reading, your own poems and imagery that I read in these past few weeks are definitely making an inspirational impact on my own writing ❤

  5. A wonderful cascade of images!

    1. Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading!

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