Done Days
Done Days
Sour eclipse drips down the aerials –
the wind minces up some holy words;
sticks them to a calendar, pinches
the sweet misery, like keg powder over lily of the valley,
seasons sleeping endings unraveled into erythrean sins,
measured, spoken about, called to memory –
blue shame in the golden garden,
the antelope’s tongue on the surface of the water,
birds of a feather, shrieking – unapologetic,
invoke it and call it
a bedroom, call it a church,
the stones rustle in the seed of sanctuary:
come cold; do lonely –
every winter will soon root wet,
(you too)
in the yawn of light
come bold, come sorry – all
eternityโs ferocious prisoners
wandering the path of night,
(will count less and less)
blankets of bloom eating the dusk warm
(dots on the sky)
by the dark cover
of eden –
all the meadows
naked
and accounted
of forget-me-nots
*showed first in Suburban Witchcraft Magazine, Issue 2
~ by Oloriel on September 6, 2022.
Posted in Lights and Shades
Tags: abstract, creative writing, creativity, days, emotions, end, inspiration, metaphore, poetry, surreal, writing
Wow! What a great opening line, Mirjana. Rest was good too. ๐
Thank you very much, Richard, I am glad you enjoyed it!
Beautiful lines ! Well shared .๐๐๐
Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading!
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โa bedroom, call it a church,โ powerful stuff! Your words bring tears to my eyes and Iโll tell you what; your writing and apple wine is just what the doctor ordered. Iโm a musician and even music canโt touch and heal my soul like your words. Absolutely beautiful, mโ friend. x
Really happy you enjoyed it, as much as I did writing. It was the first piece I wrote after a long while. โค
I feel you on that one. ๐
Beautiful
Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading!